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I need a revision to my original paper. I need my paper to meet the criteria my professor has stated: “Hi Here’s the grading breakdown for your first draft of your essay: Introduction and Thesis: 8/10–Good content in your introduction, but place your thesis at the end of the paragraph for better impact. Paragraph Structure and Organization: 5/10–Be sure that you use direct quotes as your evidence. Also, can you establish your disciplinary perspectives more clearly in your topic sentences? (Especially in paragraphs 2 and 3.) Use of Research: 10/10–Good use of APA! Style and Mechanics: 10/10–Strong written technique and academic style. Total: 33/40” The paper should also follow the outline I will provide. The paper needs to be APA style with APA style citations. The paper must follow the RTW style writing the method requires you to read course material closely and critically, and be able to apply critical thinking skilhkzls to a specific paragraph format.